2.Doestheparagraphachievecoherence?How?Yes.Theparagraphfollowsthetimeorderandusetimeindicatorstomakeiteasyforthereadertofollow.3.Canyouthinkofanyotherexpressionindicatingtime?After,before,then,afterwards,later,soon,once,now,first(second…),last,finally,eventually,next,meanwhile,afterawhile,when,during,atlast,immediately,while,ashorttimelater,suddenly,assoonas,inthepast,inthemorning(afternoon…)