As far as I read the chapter, the impression is that u have improved a lot and have focused on the biblical text with cautious interpretation, and precise analysis with highly correlation to the subject you focused on. However, some insights is still unclear whether they are yours or scholars.Your chapter is highly established and derived insight from the biblical text, but seldom illustrates any theologians’ work for further discussion. That the place you need to pay attention.If you have any questions related to the theological base, please let me know before your oral defence.