lems / areas for improvement:Much like your research the main issue with assessing the quality of the media experimentation and process is the presentation. The Illustrations you have created and presented on your page of initial research are not clear. You would benefit from drawing attention to this through the presentation and also your captioning.There are stylistic differences between the four illustrations, which are quite different in quality of line, detail, and tone. This does appear to have continued onto working with the imagery digitally. The various digital experimentation with colour and composition are good, albeit the presentation in this portfolio is not effective. Again, far too much content on a single page and not enough emphasis to show the work with focus and scale. The experimentation with type and the wordplay you have developed is successful and the strongest aspect to the campaign. I will comment further below on developmental phases.