posed a tangible contemporary issue for him to take on his writing. While he made a clear effort to find textual evidence, his writingwould have benefited from weaving support into his writing to provide more cohesion for the framework of his argument. In his recentOthello essay, his ability to use quotes as a writer was on display for why Othello was responsible for Desdemona's death. Although,his essay included first-person narration and formatting issues that were outlined as areas to avoid in the prompt. I believe that he canbuild on his second-quarter progress in utilizing textual evidence and focus on thesis construction and formatting in the second